Did any one try to write english poems...... i did ...i know it's smaal and not perfect and frankly it may not be a poem ..but at least i tried....i need your opnions and guidelines...thanks

She came to give serenity to our world during its stress....
She came to shine....her light earses our darkness.....
She came to gift hurted hearts its hapyyness.....
With her smile all nos become one yes
.....In the mind she is eternal with out forgetfulness
...........some one has to acct like a rose...when talking to the tender itself
Like a star when talking to the moon.....but forgive me...i will be human..even if when i am talking to an angel..............